Manuscript Review

Produce a thorough, constructive review of an academic manuscript — the kind of report a top-journal referee would write.

Which review skill do I want?

• /review-paper (this skill) — single comprehensive report, optional --adversarial critic-fixer loop, or --peer <journal> simulated peer-review pipeline. Best for most drafts.
• /seven-pass-review — seven independent lenses in parallel (abstract, intro, methods, results, robustness, prose, citations) then synthesized. Heavier (7× token cost). Best for submission-ready drafts or R&R stage where you need maximum coverage.
• /respond-to-referees — if you already have referee comments and need a response document, not another review.
• /slide-excellence — for lecture slides, not papers.

Input: $ARGUMENTS — path to a paper (.tex, .pdf, or .qmd), or a filename in master_supporting_docs/. Optional flags:

• --adversarial — critic-fixer loop (max 5 rounds).
• --peer <JOURNAL> — simulated peer review pipeline calibrated to <JOURNAL> (see .claude/references/journal-profiles.md for available short names).
• --r2 / --r3 — R&R continuation mode (requires --peer). Reloads prior round, classifies concerns Resolved / Partial / Not addressed.
• --stress — hostile-editor stress test (requires --peer). Forces SKEPTIC dispositions, doubles critical peeves.
• --variance (followed by integer N, default 3) — reviewer-disposition variance mode (requires --peer). Runs N referees with independently sampled dispositions from the 6-way taxonomy. Editor aggregates into a decision distribution, not a point estimate. Mutually exclusive with --stress and --r2/--r3.
• --no-novelty-check — skip editor's WebSearch novelty probe (default is ON).
• --no-cross-artifact — skip auto-invocation of /review-r + /audit-reproducibility on referenced scripts.

Already received referee comments? Use `/respond-to-referees` instead. That skill cross-references each referee concern against the revised manuscript and drafts a complete response document.

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Modes

Default mode (single-pass)

One comprehensive review report. Fast, low token cost, suitable for early drafts where the author wants feedback and will iterate manually.

Adversarial mode (--adversarial)

Iterative critic-fixer loop modeled on `/qa-quarto`. The critic identifies issues, the fixer proposes and applies edits (with user approval), and the critic re-audits. Loops until APPROVED or max 5 rounds.

Use when: preparing a pre-submission draft, responding to a journal-desk rejection with substantive revisions, or after your own major rewrite. Costs more tokens but produces a manuscript the critic has signed off on.

Peer-review mode (--peer <JOURNAL>)

Simulated editorial pipeline: editor desk review → referee selection → 2 blind referees with different dispositions → editorial synthesis. Calibrated to a target journal from .claude/references/journal-profiles.md. Use when: pre-submission dress rehearsal, choosing between target journals, R&R planning.

This mode is materially different from --adversarial: adversarial runs the same critic 5× with fresh context; --peer runs different personas (editor + 2 dispositioned referees drawn from 6-way taxonomy: STRUCTURAL / CREDIBILITY / MEASUREMENT / POLICY / THEORY / SKEPTIC) whose priors are deliberately different and who are blind to each other.

Agents used (all reimplemented in this template; adapted from Hugo Sant'Anna's clo-author with permission):

• .claude/agents/editor.md — editor (desk review, referee selection, synthesis).
• .claude/agents/domain-referee.md — substance referee.
• .claude/agents/methods-referee.md — methodology referee (paper-type-aware).

Sub-flags:

• --r2 / --r3 — R&R mode. Skips fresh desk review; reloads prior round's reports; same referees + dispositions + peeves; classifies each prior concern as Resolved / Partial / Not addressed. Hard cap at --r3 (no round 4+).
• --stress — Hostile editor. Forces both referees to SKEPTIC disposition, doubles critical peeves, framing: "you are looking for reasons to reject this paper." Output is a concern-list gauntlet, not a decision letter.
• --variance (with integer N, default 3) — Reviewer-disposition variance mode. Runs N referees with independently sampled dispositions from the 6-way taxonomy (STRUCTURAL / CREDIBILITY / MEASUREMENT / POLICY / THEORY / SKEPTIC). Editor synthesizes into a distribution of decisions, not a single verdict. See "Variance mode" below.
• --no-novelty-check — Disables the editor's WebSearch novelty probes (default is ON). Use in offline or hallucination-sensitive contexts. Novelty-check caveat (document this to users): WebSearch can return hallucinated citations or miss paywalled recent work. Always surface novelty-probe results as flags for manual verification, not verdicts.

Variance mode (--peer --variance N)

Why this mode exists. Default --peer runs an editor + 2 referees with dispositions sampled once. A single peer-review pass is a point estimate of how the paper would fare — but the AgentReview ACL 2024 study (arXiv:2406.12708) found that ~37% of paper decisions vary purely from reviewer-disposition sampling and another 27.7% from partial author-identity disclosure. A point estimate hides this variance.

Variance mode runs N independent referees (default N=3, max N=5 for token-cost discipline) with disposition sampling, then reports a decision distribution that surfaces this variance to the author.

How it works:

1. Editor performs desk review once (shared across the N referees).
2. The editor samples N dispositions from the 6-way taxonomy with replacement. Stratification rule: if N ≥ 3, at least one SKEPTIC is always sampled (avoids drawing N friendly referees by chance).
3. Each of the N referees runs in an isolated context (Agent with context: fork) — same manuscript, same paper-type rubric, different disposition. Referees are blind to each other.
4. Editor receives N independent reports and produces:
   • A decision-distribution table (e.g., 2/3 R&R, 1/3 Reject with the modal verdict highlighted).
   • A concern-frequency table showing which concerns appeared across multiple referees (high frequency = robust criticism; low frequency = disposition-dependent).
   • An editorial recommendation that explicitly references the variance ("modal verdict R&R, with one SKEPTIC dissent on identification — author should address the identification concern even though it's not the majority position").

Output files:

• quality_reports/peer_review_<paper>/referee_1.md … referee_N.md (per-referee reports)
• quality_reports/peer_review_<paper>/decision_distribution.md (aggregate table + concern-frequency analysis)
• quality_reports/peer_review_<paper>/editor_synthesis.md (final editorial letter)

Cost discipline. Variance mode multiplies referee-tier cost by N relative to default --peer (which runs 2 referees). The Cost-Conscious Composition section of the workflow guide recommends keeping referees on Sonnet (mid-tier) for variance runs and reserving Opus for the editor synthesis. Hard cap at N=5; for higher variance estimates, run --variance 5 twice and combine offline.

Mutual exclusivity. Variance mode cannot combine with --stress (which forces SKEPTIC×2 and would defeat the sampling purpose) or --r2/--r3 (which reuses prior-round dispositions for continuity). The skill halts with an error if mutually-exclusive flags are combined.

When to reach for it:

• Pre-submission dress rehearsal where you want to know not just "will this paper survive review" but "how confidently will it survive."
• Deciding between target journals — run --variance 3 against two journal profiles, compare distributions.
• Responding to a rejection where the referee panel felt unrepresentative — --variance 5 against the same journal profile gives an empirical sense of whether the original referees were typical.

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Steps (both modes)

1. Locate and read the manuscript. First strip flags (--adversarial, --no-cross-artifact) from $ARGUMENTS to get the bare manuscript path. Check:

   • Direct path (bare path from step 1)
   • master_supporting_docs/supporting_papers/$ARGUMENTS
   • Glob for partial matches

2. Read the full paper end-to-end with the Read tool — a 1M-token window holds a full paper. For long PDFs, page through with the pages parameter (up to 20 pages per request).

3. Evaluate across 6 dimensions (see below).

4. Generate 3–5 "referee objections" — the tough questions a top referee would ask.

5. Produce the review report.

6. Save to quality_reports/paper_review_[sanitized_name]_round[N].md (N=1 in default mode; N increments in adversarial mode).

6b. Cross-artifact integration. Unless $ARGUMENTS contains --no-cross-artifact, and if the manuscript references analysis scripts (detected via \input{scripts/...}, %% source: comments, or matching scripts/R/_outputs/ filenames), auto-invoke:

• /review-r on each referenced script (forked subagent, results to quality_reports/cross_artifact_[paper]/review_r_*.md)
• /audit-reproducibility on the manuscript + outputs dir (results to quality_reports/cross_artifact_[paper]/reproducibility.md)

Merge critical cross-artifact findings (code bug invalidates paper claim, reproducibility FAIL) into a new "Cross-Artifact Findings" section at the top of the paper review report. See `.claude/rules/cross-artifact-review.md` for the full protocol.

7. If --adversarial is in $ARGUMENTS: invoke the critic-fixer loop defined in the next section. Otherwise stop here.

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Review Dimensions

1. Argument Structure

• Is the research question clearly stated?
• Does the introduction motivate the question effectively?
• Is the logical flow sound (question → method → results → conclusion)?
• Are the conclusions supported by the evidence?
• Are limitations acknowledged?

2. Identification Strategy

• Is the causal claim credible?
• What are the key identifying assumptions? Are they stated explicitly?
• Are there threats to identification (omitted variables, reverse causality, measurement error)?
• Are robustness checks adequate?
• Is the estimator appropriate for the research design?

3. Econometric Specification

• Correct standard errors (clustered? robust? bootstrap?)?
• Appropriate functional form?
• Sample selection issues?
• Multiple testing concerns?
• Are point estimates economically meaningful (not just statistically significant)?

4. Literature Positioning

• Are the key papers cited?
• Is prior work characterized accurately?
• Is the contribution clearly differentiated from existing work?
• Any missing citations that a referee would flag?

5. Writing Quality

• Clarity and concision
• Academic tone
• Consistent notation throughout
• Abstract effectively summarizes the paper
• Tables and figures are self-contained (clear labels, notes, sources)

6. Presentation

• Are tables and figures well-designed?
• Is notation consistent throughout?
• Are there any typos, grammatical errors, or formatting issues?
• Is the paper the right length for the contribution?

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Output Format

# Manuscript Review: [Paper Title]

**Date:** [YYYY-MM-DD]
**Reviewer:** review-paper skill
**File:** [path to manuscript]

## Summary Assessment

**Overall recommendation:** [Strong Accept / Accept / Revise & Resubmit / Reject]

[2-3 paragraph summary: main contribution, strengths, and key concerns]

## Strengths

1. [Strength 1]
2. [Strength 2]
3. [Strength 3]

## Major Concerns

### MC1: [Title]
- **Dimension:** [Identification / Econometrics / Argument / Literature / Writing / Presentation]
- **Issue:** [Specific description]
- **Suggestion:** [How to address it]
- **Location:** [Section/page/table if applicable]

[Repeat for each major concern]

## Minor Concerns

### mc1: [Title]
- **Issue:** [Description]
- **Suggestion:** [Fix]

[Repeat]

## Referee Objections

These are the tough questions a top referee would likely raise:

### RO1: [Question]
**Why it matters:** [Why this could be fatal]
**How to address it:** [Suggested response or additional analysis]

[Repeat for 3-5 objections]

## Specific Comments

[Line-by-line or section-by-section comments, if any]

## Summary Statistics

| Dimension | Rating (1-5) |
|-----------|-------------|
| Argument Structure | [N] |
| Identification | [N] |
| Econometrics | [N] |
| Literature | [N] |
| Writing | [N] |
| Presentation | [N] |
| **Overall** | **[N]** |

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Principles

• Be constructive. Every criticism should come with a suggestion.
• Be specific. Reference exact sections, equations, tables.
• Think like a referee at a top-5 journal. What would make them reject?
• Distinguish fatal flaws from minor issues. Not everything is equally important.
• Acknowledge what's done well. Good research deserves recognition.
• Do NOT fabricate details. If you can't read a section clearly, say so.

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Adversarial Mode — Critic-Fixer Loop

Only runs if --adversarial is in $ARGUMENTS.

Pattern adapted from `/qa-quarto`, which uses the same loop to iterate on slide quality. Papers get it now because the single-pass review leaves authors doing manual fix-and-resubmit cycles.

Flow

Phase 0: Pre-flight
  │
  ├─ Verify the manuscript compiles (xelatex / quarto render) if applicable
  ├─ Snapshot the pre-review version: git stash OR copy to a .review-backup/
  │
Phase 1: Critic audit (round N=1,2,3,...)
  │
  ├─ Run the default review above, producing a round-N report
  ├─ If the report has ZERO Major Concerns and ZERO Referee Objections
  │  rated "fatal":
  │     → VERDICT = APPROVED. Stop the loop. Write final summary.
  │  Else: continue.
  │
Phase 2: Fixer
  │
  ├─ For each Major Concern in the round-N report, produce a concrete
  │  proposed edit (diff or new text block).
  ├─ Present proposed edits to the user grouped by severity (Critical →
  │  Major → Minor). Ask for approval: "apply all", "apply critical+major
  │  only", "review each", or "abort".
  ├─ Apply approved edits with Edit / Edit tools.
  ├─ If the manuscript is a compile target (`.tex` / `.qmd`), re-compile
  │  and verify it still builds.
  │
Phase 3: Re-audit
  │
  └─ Spawn a FRESH-CONTEXT subagent (via the `Agent` tool, `subagent_type` set to
     general-purpose) to re-read the paper and produce a round-(N+1)
     report. Fresh context prevents anchoring bias — the new reviewer
     sees the edited paper, not the diff.
     → Jump back to Phase 1.

Iteration limits — loop-until-dry

Same loop-until-dry primitive as /qa-quarto (`orchestrator-protocol.md`): the critic returns FINDINGs in the shared schema (`orchestration-schemas.md`) and the loop converges when a round adds 0 new CRITICAL/MAJOR concerns (deduped on id = sha1(file:line:locus)), not at a fixed count.

• Convergence: APPROVED when a round produces zero Major Concerns and zero fatal Referee Objections.
• Fallback cap: 5 rounds bounds a non-converging loop; after round 5, halt and list remaining concerns.
• Two-strikes: if the same Concern label appears in rounds N and N+2, flag as "author disagreement" and let the user decide (keep-as-is with rationale vs. another fix attempt) — see `summary-parity.md`.
• Budget escape: if cumulative token cost exceeds the spend cap (default ~500k — a spend ceiling, not a context-window limit, since each re-audit runs in fresh context), warn and let the user cap further rounds.

Stopping criteria

Condition	Action
Zero Major Concerns, zero fatal Referee Objections	APPROVED — final summary
Max 5 rounds reached	HALTED — list remaining concerns, user decides
User approves zero fixes in a round	HALTED — user signals "I disagree with this review"
Compile fails after applied fixes	ROLLED BACK to pre-round-N snapshot, report compile error, user decides

Final report

After the loop ends, write quality_reports/paper_review_[sanitized_name]_FINAL.md:

# Final Review: [Paper Title]

**Rounds:** N
**Verdict:** APPROVED | HALTED (max rounds) | HALTED (user override) | ROLLED BACK
**Token cost estimate:** ~XXk

## Round Summary
| Round | Major Concerns | Fatal Objections | Status |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 7 | 2 | Fixed 5, deferred 2 |
| 2 | 3 | 1 | ...              |
| ... | ... | ... | ...         |
| N | 0 | 0 | APPROVED        |

## Changes Applied
[link to git diff between the pre-round-1 snapshot and HEAD]

## Remaining Concerns (if HALTED)
[list with severity + rationale]

## Next Steps
[recommended action: submit / one more pass / substantial revision]

When NOT to use adversarial mode

• Early exploratory drafts (the loop forces premature polish on ideas still being shaped)
• Papers you don't yet have compilable source for (can't verify edits)
• When you'd rather get ONE opinion and decide for yourself (adversarial-mode enforces "critic signed off" semantics — that's sometimes the wrong frame)

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--peer [journal] workflow detail

Phase 0: Cross-artifact pre-flight (runs BEFORE desk review in --peer mode)

Unless --no-cross-artifact is set, auto-invoke /audit-reproducibility on the manuscript + its outputs directory first. Any reproducibility FAIL becomes desk-reject-worthy evidence the editor can cite. See .claude/rules/cross-artifact-review.md.

Reports: quality_reports/cross_artifact_[paper]/reproducibility.md.

Novelty-probe Post-Flight (new in v1.7.0). The editor's novelty probe uses WebSearch to check whether the paper's contribution has been made before. WebSearch results can be hallucinated — fabricated prior work, misattributed findings, wrong years. Before the editor's desk review incorporates novelty-probe claims into its decision, those claims must pass Post-Flight Verification per `.claude/rules/post-flight-verification.md`:

1. The editor collects novelty-probe claims (e.g., "Smith 2022 already showed this exact result").
2. Spawn claim-verifier via the Agent tool with subagent_type=claim-verifier and context=fork, passing the claims + verification questions + candidate source URLs. Forked fresh context is the CoVe independence trick.
3. Only verified claims are allowed into the desk-review narrative. Unverified claims are surfaced separately as "editor could not verify — manual check recommended" rather than presented as established prior work.

Opt-out: --no-novelty-check already skips the probe entirely. If the probe runs, Post-Flight is mandatory.

Pre-Flight Report (required before Phase 1). This is the RUN_CONFIG echo from `orchestrator-protocol.md` — every interactive choice (journal, dispositions, peeve budget, N referees, cross-artifact/novelty toggles, round) is resolved before the forked editor/referees spawn, because a forked subagent cannot stop to ask. Output it so the user can verify inputs, and halt here on any unresolved required field (unknown journal, missing script) rather than mid-run:

## Pre-Flight Report — /review-paper --peer

**Manuscript:** [path] — [page count, last modified]
**Target journal:** [JOURNAL_SHORT] → [full name from `.claude/references/journal-profiles.md`]
**Journal profile loaded:** [yes/no; resolved from `.claude/references/journal-profiles.md`; key adjustments: e.g., "Identification 35 → 40"]
**Cross-artifact scripts found:** [list referenced .R / .py / .do files]
**Reproducibility status:** [PASS / FAIL from Phase 0] — [N of M claims within tolerance]
**Round:** [fresh / r2 / r3 / stress]

If the manuscript path doesn't exist, the target journal isn't in .claude/references/journal-profiles.md, or a cross-artifact script is missing, stop and surface the issue before proceeding.

Phase 1: Editor desk review

Spawn forked subagent editor with the manuscript path and --peer <JOURNAL> context. Editor:

• Reads journal profile from .claude/references/journal-profiles.md → states "Calibrated to: [journal]".
• Reads abstract + intro + methods overview + headline results.
• Runs novelty probes (unless --no-novelty-check).
• Either DESK REJECT (pipeline terminates with rejection letter) or SEND OUT.

Report: quality_reports/peer_review_[paper]/desk_review.md.

Phase 1b: Referee selection (inside editor)

Editor draws 2 DIFFERENT dispositions from journal's Referee-pool weights and assigns each referee 1 critical + 1 constructive peeve (stress mode: 2 critical + 1 constructive). Appended to desk_review.md.

Phase 2: Two parallel referees, blind to each other

Spawn in parallel:

• Forked subagent domain-referee with disposition D1, peeves P1 → referee_domain.md.
• Forked subagent methods-referee with disposition D2, peeves P2 → referee_methods.md.

Each referee must include "What would change my mind: [specific ask]" on every MAJOR concern.

Phase 3: Editor synthesis (reduce → judge, with the hallucination gate)

Read both referee reports. Reduce their FINDINGs, classify each MAJOR concern as FATAL / ADDRESSABLE / TASTE, and produce the editorial decision using the decision rule table in editor.md.

Post-judge hallucination gate (`orchestration-schemas.md` §4): the editor reduces the referees — it must not desk-reject or escalate on a CRITICAL reason neither referee raised. Any editor-introduced blocker that is not traceable to a referee finding is re-verified in a fresh claim-verifier fork or dropped to [JUDGE-HALLUCINATED] and the decision recomputed. (The editor may always downgrade or de-duplicate referee concerns.)

Report: quality_reports/peer_review_[paper]/editorial_decision.md.

Phase 4: Summary

Tell the user:

• Final decision (Accept / Minor / Major / Reject / Desk Reject)
• Token usage + wall-clock time
• Paths to all 4 reports (desk_review, referee_domain, referee_methods, editorial_decision)

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Output layout for --peer mode

quality_reports/
  peer_review_[sanitized_paper_name]/
    desk_review.md                       # Phase 1 + Phase 1b
    referee_domain.md                    # Phase 2 (parallel)
    referee_methods.md                   # Phase 2 (parallel)
    editorial_decision.md                # Phase 3
    (R&R rounds: desk_review_r2.md, referee_domain_r2.md, ...)
  cross_artifact_[sanitized_paper_name]/
    reproducibility.md                   # Phase 0
    review_r_*.md                        # Phase 0 (one per referenced script)

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Field adaptation

The shipped journal-profiles.md covers 5 econ journals (AER, QJE, JPE, ECMA, ReStud) plus 3 political-science journals (APSR, AJPS, JOP). For other fields (finance, biology, CS, etc.), copy templates/journal-profile-template.md into a new section of journal-profiles.md and fill in the schema. See the "Field adaptation" section at the end of journal-profiles.md for detailed guidance. The pipeline itself is field-agnostic; only the calibration data changes.

For non-econ paper types in methods-referee.md, extend the paper-type list (e.g., biology: observational / experimental / computational / review).

Findings are validated, not just written (v2.5)

This skill's reviewers emit findings under the machine-checked contract in
`finding-schema.json`. Reports are JSON arrays.

Smoke-test the harness before spending review effort — a run that fans out reviewers and
then cannot write a valid report has wasted the whole pass:

echo '[]' | python3 scripts/validate-findings.py

Then, before presenting any summary:

python3 scripts/validate-findings.py <report>.json   # exit 0 required

What the contract forces, and why:

• rule — the documented rule or standard violated. A finding citing no rule is an
  opinion, and opinions do not gate a commit.
• failing_case — a concrete configuration under which the claim breaks, or the exact
  missing hypothesis. "This could be clearer" does not validate.
• id = sha1("<file>:<line>:<locus>") — deterministic, so dedup across rounds is
  exact and the two-strikes rule is checkable rather than eyeballed.
• mechanical — true only for fixes that cannot change a result (typo, cross-reference,
  formatting, label). Never for an estimand, assumption, specification, inference
  procedure, sample definition, or reporting language: those return to the researcher.

Apply the per-lens evidence burdens and the "does NOT count" filters in
`orchestration-schemas.md` §7 before
verification, so known false alarms never reach the judge. The verifier pass is
refute-biased: only verdict: "confirmed" findings ship; anything it cannot ground is
dropped, not downgraded to a warning.

Cross-references

• `.claude/skills/audit-reproducibility/SKILL.md` — numeric-claim verification (auto-invoked on referenced scripts).
• `.claude/skills/replication-package/SKILL.md` — assemble the AEA DCAS deposit once the paper passes review.
• `.claude/skills/capture-environment/SKILL.md` · `.claude/skills/disclosure-check/SKILL.md` — environment capture + restricted-data screening for the deposit.
• `.claude/skills/seven-pass-review/SKILL.md` — heavier 7-lens pass for submission-ready drafts.