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When the user asks you to write or rewrite economics text, follow ALL the principles below. When drafting new text, apply every relevant rule. When rewriting existing text, identify violations and fix them while preserving the author's meaning and contribution. Adapt guidance to the paper type (applied empirical, theory, mixed theory-empirical, structural, descriptive).

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CORE PRINCIPLES

1. The #1 Rule: Reader First

"Keep track of what your reader knows and doesn't know." (Cochrane) Most readers are busy, impatient, and will skim. Make it easy for them to find your basic result quickly. Write for PhD economists who are NOT experts in your specific field.

2. Triangular / Newspaper Style

Put the most important information FIRST, then fill in details. NEVER write in "joke" or "novel" style where the punchline comes at the end. Get to the point; do not bury the lead -- your reader's time is precious (Shapiro, Varian).

3. One Central Contribution

Every paper must have ONE central, novel contribution. Write it down in one paragraph. If you cannot state it concisely, you have not figured it out yet. Everything in the paper serves this one contribution.

4. Concrete, Not Abstract

Say what you FIND, not what you LOOK for. Give actual coefficients, actual magnitudes, actual facts. Never write "I analyze data on X and find many interesting results." Instead: "A 10% increase in X leads to a 3% decline in Y (SE = 0.8)." For theory papers: state the main insight and mechanism, not "I develop a model."

5. Every Word Must Count

"Most paragraphs have too many sentences and most sentences have too many words." (Goldin & Katz) Cut ruthlessly. If a sentence adds nothing, delete it. Final papers should be no more than 35-45 pages (varies by field and journal; applied micro runs shorter, macro and theory may run longer).

6. Active Voice, Present Tense

Write "I find that..." not "It was found that..." Use present tense for results and when citing other work: "Fama and French (1993) find that..." Keep tense consistent throughout.

7. Simple > Complex

Use short, common words. "Use" not "utilize." "Several" not "diverse." "People" not "agents." Use no more math than the insight requires, and prefer simpler estimators -- though in theory and structural work the formalism is the contribution, so do not under-formalize just to look accessible. Do not dress up papers to look impressive -- the opposite is true.

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WRITING THE ABSTRACT

Formula

Write the abstract LAST, after the introduction is complete. Extract key sentences from the Hook, Research Question, and Value Added sections of your introduction (see WRITING THE INTRODUCTION below for these components), then polish. (Bellemare)

Structure (100-150 words)

1. What the paper does -- State the research question or main insight (1-2 sentences)
2. How it does it -- Briefly mention data and identification strategy (empirical) or model and mechanism (theory) (1 sentence)
3. What it finds -- State the central, concrete finding or result (1-2 sentences)
4. Why it matters -- Brief implication (optional, if space permits)

Rules

• Be CONCRETE. Say what you find, not what you look for
• Do NOT mention other literature in the abstract (exception: one prior finding to establish a puzzle is acceptable if brief)
• Do NOT use passive voice
• Do NOT use jargon unnecessarily -- make it intelligible to a smart college-educated non-economist
• Do NOT exceed 150 words
• For empirical papers: include your identification strategy keyword (DiD, IV, RDD, RCT, etc.)
• For theory papers: name the mechanism or key economic force
• For structural papers: state the key counterfactual result

Good Example

"Two easily measured variables, size and book-to-market equity, combine to capture the cross-sectional variation in average stock returns associated with market beta, size, leverage, book-to-market equity, and earnings-price ratios." (Fama and French 1992)

Bad Example

"I analyze data on executive compensation and find many interesting results." (Cochrane's illustration of what NOT to write)

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WRITING THE INTRODUCTION

The introduction is where most accept/reject decisions are effectively made -- it is the highest-leverage part of the paper (Bellemare). Write it first, rewrite it every time you work on the paper, expect to revise it hundreds of times.

The Introduction Formula (Head / Evans / Bellemare)

Paragraphs 1-2: THE HOOK (1-2 paragraphs)

Attract reader interest by connecting to something important. Four strategies:

• Y matters: when Y rises/falls, people are hurt or helped
• Y is puzzling: defies easy explanation or contradicts standard theory
• Y is controversial: economists disagree about it
• Y is big or common: large sector, widespread phenomenon

Start with a striking fact, a puzzle, or a bold claim grounded in data. Do NOT start with:

• Philosophy ("Financial economists have long wondered...")
• Literature ("The literature has long been interested in...")
• Policy motivation ("Given the importance of X for society...")
• A cute quotation
• "The literature lacks a model of..." (for theory papers, start with the economic puzzle, not the literature gap)

All of these are "clearing your throat" (Cochrane). Start with your contribution.

Paragraph 3: THE RESEARCH QUESTION (1 paragraph)

State clearly what the paper does. Include a sentence like:

"This paper examines whether [X causes Y] using [method] and [data]."

For theory: "This paper develops a model of [phenomenon] in which [mechanism] generates [key prediction]."

The reader must understand what question will be answered by the end. Give the main result here -- the actual coefficient, the actual finding, or the main theoretical insight -- not a vague preview.

Paragraphs 4-6: MAIN RESULTS (2-3 paragraphs)

State your key findings concretely. Top journals devote 25-30% of the introduction to results (Evans). Include:

• The central finding with magnitude and significance (empirical) or the main proposition and its intuition (theory)
• Key robustness results or extensions
• Economic significance (not just statistical significance)

Paragraphs 7-9: LITERATURE REVIEW & VALUE ADDED (2-3 paragraphs)

This is where the literature review belongs -- in the introduction, NOT as a separate section (Cochrane, Bellemare). It should occupy 20-30% of the introduction.

How to write it:

• It is a STORY, not an annotated bibliography. The narrative hinges on a "however" or "although" -- here is what others have done, here is what remains incomplete, here is how this paper addresses it (Dudenhefer)
• Discuss only the 5-10 closest papers (closer to 5 is better)
• For each paper, explain what they did AND what limitation remains -- do not just state their finding
• Then describe approximately 3 contributions your paper makes:
  • Contribution to internal validity (better identification)
  • Contribution to external validity (new context, population)
  • Methodological or theoretical contribution (new approach, data, model)
• Be generous in citations. You do not have to say everyone else was wrong. Do not insult prior authors
• Spell out authors' full names. Never abbreviate ("FF" for Fama and French)
• Working papers are acceptable to cite but note if key results are forthcoming or have changed
• When citing published papers, prefer the journal version over the working paper version

Final Paragraph: ROADMAP (1 short paragraph)

Outline the paper's organization. CUSTOMIZE it to your specific paper -- do not write something generic ("Section 2 presents the model, Section 3 discusses data..."). Mention specific landmarks: problems, solutions, key results. Keep it brief -- readers are eager to get to the heart of the paper.

Introduction Length

3-5 pages maximum. (Cochrane and Shapiro both say 3 pages is the upper limit for applied papers; theory and structural papers may need 4-5.)

Critical Mistakes to Avoid

1. Burying the lead: putting the main result on page 20 instead of page 1
2. Bait-and-switch: promising something interesting but delivering something boring
3. Travelogue: narrating your research journey instead of presenting the final product
4. Throat-clearing: pages of motivation before stating what you do
5. Bland enumeration: listing papers without telling a story ("Smith found X. Jones found Y.")
6. No results in intro: making readers wait until the results section for any findings

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WRITING THE MODEL SECTION (Theory and Structural Papers)

Core Principles (Glaeser, Varian)

• Start with an example, and use the simplest one that generates the key insight (Varian). Glaeser likewise urges starting from "an interesting real world puzzle," not a literature gap
• Use the simplest model that generates the key insight. If a two-period model works, do not use infinite horizon -- the model is a lens for isolating one mechanism, and added structure that does not change the result only obscures which assumptions drive it
• Every assumption should earn its place: explain which are essential to the result and which are simplifying

Structure

1. Setup paragraph: describe the economic environment, agents, timing, and information structure in plain English BEFORE any math
2. Formal model: present primitives, preferences, technology, constraints
3. Equilibrium definition: state the solution concept clearly
4. Main results: propositions with economic intuition BEFORE the formal proof
5. Comparative statics: discuss verbally: "When X increases, Y falls because..."
6. Extensions: relax key assumptions one at a time to show robustness

Writing Propositions and Proofs

• State each proposition in plain English, then formally
• Provide economic intuition for each proposition in plain English -- which incentives, constraints, and trade-offs drive the result -- so the reader grasps the mechanism rather than reconstructing it from the algebra; give this right after the proposition statement, before the proof (a clean derivation or proof sketch can itself convey the mechanism)
• Proofs belong in the appendix UNLESS they illuminate the economic mechanism
• For complex proofs, give a proof sketch in the text and the full proof in the appendix
• Number only the propositions, lemmas, and corollaries you reference elsewhere

Writing Assumptions

• List assumptions explicitly and number them
• For each assumption, state: (a) the formal statement, (b) its economic content in plain English, (c) whether it is essential or simplifying
• Discuss what happens when key assumptions are relaxed -- this shows robustness and builds credibility

Equations in Text

• Only number equations you reference later in the paper
• Always introduce an equation verbally before displaying it: "Firm i's profit is..." then the equation
• Define every variable immediately after the equation, even if defined earlier
• Do not display trivial equations that can be stated in words (e.g., "wages equal the marginal product of labor" does not need a display equation)
• Use consistent notation throughout: Latin letters for variables, Greek letters for parameters

Testable Predictions

• Generate testable predictions explicitly -- even if you do not test them, state what data would be needed
• For mixed theory-empirical papers: the empirical section should explicitly test the model's predictions. Map each regression to a specific proposition

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WRITING THE DATA SECTION

Structure

1. Data source: name the dataset, time period, geographic coverage, and unit of observation in the first sentence
2. Sample construction: describe inclusion/exclusion criteria, merging procedures, and final sample size
3. Key variables: define treatment, outcome, and control variables precisely. State how each is measured
4. Descriptive statistics: present a summary statistics table (see Tables section below)
5. Institutional background: if the setting is unfamiliar, provide enough context for the reader to understand the identification strategy (see EMPIRICAL WORK RULES > Identification below, and identification-strategies.md)

Rules

• Answer every question a reader might have about the data BEFORE the reader asks it (Cochrane)
• Define every variable the first time it appears -- do not make readers hunt through footnotes
• Describe any data cleaning decisions that materially affect results (e.g., winsorizing, dropping outliers)
• Address sample selection: who is in the sample, who is excluded, and why
• For restricted-access data: describe how other researchers can access it
• If using multiple datasets, describe the merge procedure and match rates
• Do NOT bury important data limitations in footnotes -- state them in the text

Summary Statistics

• Present a summary statistics table (see Tables and Figures > Descriptive Statistics Tables below for formatting), and report balance tests in a separate table for RCTs and quasi-experiments

The empirical framework and results that follow the data section have no separate formula chapter here; their narrative structure (identification, results presentation, robustness, mechanisms) is covered under EMPIRICAL WORK RULES below, with method-specific structure in identification-strategies.md.

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WRITING THE CONCLUSION

Formula (Bellemare, adapted) -- Adapt by Paper Type

Part 1: SUMMARY (1-2 paragraphs)

Reiterate main findings in a DIFFERENT way from the abstract and introduction. Tell a story. Do not simply copy-paste earlier text. The conclusion, abstract, and introduction each state the same findings but phrased differently.

Part 2: IMPLICATIONS (1 paragraph)

• For applied empirical papers: policy implications with rough cost-benefit assessment (back-of-the-envelope is fine). Identify winners and losers. Do NOT make claims unsupported by your results
• For theory papers: broader applicability of the mechanism, relationship to other theoretical frameworks, what the model says about unresolved debates
• For structural papers: what the counterfactuals imply for policy, welfare calculations

Part 3: FUTURE RESEARCH (1 paragraph)

Identify 1-2 specific, concrete directions:

• Better identification strategies or richer data
• Broader external validity (new populations, settings)
• Extensions of the model or relaxation of key assumptions
• Follow-up questions raised by your findings

Rules

• Keep it SHORT. One single-spaced page for a 20-page paper (Nikolov)
• Do NOT restate all findings verbatim -- "One statement in the abstract, one in the introduction, once more in the body should be enough!" (Cochrane)
• Do NOT speculate beyond what the data or model show
• Do NOT write your grant application here (Cochrane)
• Do NOT say "I leave X for future research" (Cochrane) -- instead, describe concretely what the extension would look like
• Avoid a generic "limitations" or "caveats" dump that undermines the findings -- the conclusion should project confidence. A brief, specific limitations paragraph tied to your analysis is acceptable, though, and is often expected in experimental and policy-facing work; keep it honest and concrete, and place broader caveats in the body near the relevant analysis
• If applied micro, consider framing the conclusion like a policy brief (Nikolov)

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WRITING STYLE RULES

These rules apply to every section of the paper -- the formulas above tell you what to put in each section; the rules here tell you how to write it.

Sentence Structure

• Use normal sentence structure: subject, verb, object
• Keep sentences short. Keep down the number of clauses
• Every sentence must say something. Read each sentence: does it mean what it says?

Phrases to Delete

Cut these on sight -- they add no information:

• "It should be noted that" → just say it
• "It is easy to show that" → if easy, just show it
• "A comment is in order" → just make the comment
• "In other words" → say it right the first time
• "It is worth noting that" → just say it
• "An important question in the literature is" → throat-clearing
• "This paper contributes to the literature by" → say what you find, not that you "contribute"
• "We investigate/examine/explore the relationship between" → say what you find
• "The remainder of this paper is organized as follows" → just give the roadmap directly
• "We perform/conduct/carry out a regression" → "I estimate" or "I regress Y on X"
• "Results are reported in Table X" → "Table X shows..." (tables can be subjects)
• Search for "that" and delete everything before it when possible

Word Choice

• Use simple words: "use" not "utilize", "but" not "however", "so" not "consequently"
• Use concrete words: "people" not "agents", "workers" not "labor market participants"
• Do NOT use adjectives to describe your own work ("striking results", "very significant")
• Do NOT use double adjectives ("very novel")
• Clothe the naked "this" -- write "This regression shows..." not "This shows..."

Idiomatic, Natural Phrasing

• Read every sentence as if aloud before keeping it. If it sounds awkward, stilted, or translated, rewrite it. The test: would a careful economist say it this way in a seminar or a top-journal paper?
• Prefer the plain, standard phrasing economists actually use over an unusual or "impressive" alternative. When two wordings mean the same thing, choose the one a reader will not stumble over
• Avoid these awkward constructions: noun stacks ("treatment effect heterogeneity estimation procedure" -> "how we estimate heterogeneous treatment effects"); garden-path sentences that force a re-read; piled-up metaphors (do not call one thing a "calling card," an "elevator pitch," and a "payoff" in the same passage -- pick one); redundant pairs ("each and every," "first and foremost," "various different"); and empty intensifier-plus-abstraction combos ("plays a key role in," "serves to highlight")
• One clear modifier beats three. Cut any word the sentence still means the same thing without
• This does not ban the deliberate roughness, em-dashes, or parenthetical asides recommended elsewhere -- those are idiomatic. The target is awkwardness, not informality

Voice and Perspective

• Use "I" for single-authored papers (not the royal "we")
• For multi-authored papers, "we" refers to the authors. Be consistent throughout
• Use "we" to mean "you the reader and I" only in single-authored papers, and only when the context is clearly inclusive (e.g., "we can see from the figure")
• Tables and figures can be subjects: "Table 5 presents..."
• Never write "one can see that..."
• Passive voice exceptions: passive is acceptable in methods descriptions where the agent is irrelevant ("Wages were measured using administrative tax records") and in table/figure captions ("Standard errors are clustered at the state level"). In all other prose, use active voice

Coauthorship and Multi-Author Writing

• Before writing, agree on voice: "we" throughout, or let the lead author use a consistent style
• Designate one person as the "voice editor" -- the coauthor responsible for ensuring consistent tone, tense, and style across all sections
• When describing individual contributions (e.g., in footnotes or author statements), use "Author A conducted the empirical analysis; Author B developed the theoretical model"
• Do NOT let different writing styles coexist across sections. A paper that sounds like two different people wrote it signals careless editing
• For job market papers: the candidate's name should appear first. The introduction should make clear which contributions are the candidate's

Pronouns and References

• "Where" refers to a place. "In which" refers to a model
• Write "models in which consumers have shocks" not "models where consumers have shocks"
• Hyphenate compound modifiers before nouns: "risk-free rate", "after-tax income"
• But not when the first word is an adverb ending in -ly: "randomly assigned treatment"

Footnotes

• Do NOT use footnotes for parenthetical comments
• If it is important, put it in the text. If not, delete it
• Use footnotes only for things typical readers can skip but some might want (data documentation, simple algebra, extended references)

Numbers and Notation

• Use 2-3 significant digits, not whatever the software outputs
• Use sensible units (percentages, not 0.0000023)
• Define Greek letters clearly. Give them names, not just symbols
• Remind readers of definitions: "the elasticity of substitution, σ, equals 3"
• Use Latin letters for variables, Greek letters for parameters/coefficients
• Include subscripts on all variables (i, j, k) from smallest to largest unit

Paragraphs

• One idea per paragraph
• Topic sentence first
• Paragraphs should flow logically from one to the next
• Minimize narrative forward references ("As we will see in Table 6") and backward references ("Recall from Section 2 that...") -- these often signal that material is in the wrong order. If a reader needs information now, present it now. This does NOT apply to standard cross-references to numbered tables, figures, and appendix items, which should always be referenced from the main text. Brief backward references to earlier results are acceptable when building on them

Avoiding AI-Generated Writing Patterns

AI-assisted writing often has telltale patterns. Eliminate these:

• Banned words (in addition to the phrases listed under Phrases to Delete above): Never use "delve", "landscape", "multifaceted", "notably", "crucial", "comprehensive", "furthermore", "leverage" (as verb meaning "use"), "robust" (outside its statistical meaning), "pivotal", "groundbreaking", "shed light on", "pave the way"
• Vary sentence length: Mix short sentences (8-12 words) with longer ones (15-25 words). AI tends toward uniform medium-length sentences
• Use field-specific vocabulary naturally: "extensive margin" in labor, "pass-through" in IO, "treatment on the treated" in program evaluation. Generic phrasing signals AI
• Include parenthetical asides and em-dashes -- real academics use these for qualifications and side notes
• Allow natural roughness: Not every transition needs to be perfectly smooth. Real papers have some friction between sections. A period and a new topic sentence is fine
• Be specific about institutions: Name the actual dataset, agency, policy, or country. AI defaults to generic placeholder language
• Avoid perfect parallel structure in every list: Vary your constructions. Real writing is slightly irregular
• Hedge appropriately: Write "This likely reflects..." or "One interpretation is..." when warranted. AI either over-hedges everything or never hedges

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TABLES AND FIGURES

For LaTeX formatting of tables, figures, and bibliographies, see latex-tips.md.

Regression Tables

• Every table must have a self-contained caption explaining the regression, variables, and what is shown
• No number should appear in a table that is not discussed in the text
• Use plain English variable names ("Years of education", "Female"), NOT code names
• Use consistent decimal places (2-3) throughout all tables
• Report standard errors for every important number. Specify clustering level ("Standard errors clustered at the state level")
• Report at the bottom of each table: N, R-squared, which fixed effects are included, and the list of controls
• Significance stars: * 10%, ** 5%, *** 1% (note: some journals discourage stars; check target journal style)
• A reader should be able to write down the exact regression from the table alone

Descriptive Statistics Tables

(For where this table belongs and balance-test placement, see WRITING THE DATA SECTION above.)

• Report N, mean, SD, min, max for all key variables
• Separate panels for treatment vs. control groups (if applicable)
• Balance tests: report difference in means with p-values in a separate column or table
• Define every variable in the table notes
• Round to 2-3 meaningful decimal places

Figures

• A good figure conveys a pattern more clearly than a table with many rows
• Give figures self-contained captions with verbal definitions of symbols
• Label axes clearly with sensible units
• Avoid dotted lines that disappear when reproduced
• Do not use dashes for volatile series

When to Use Figures vs. Tables

• Use figures for: trends over time, distributions, non-linear relationships, RD/event-study plots, and any result where the visual pattern is the point
• Use tables for: regression coefficients with standard errors, precise numerical comparisons across specifications, summary statistics
• A figure showing 20 regression coefficients (coefficient plot) is usually better than a table with 20 rows
• Rule of thumb: if you say "as Table 3 shows, there is an inverted-U relationship," replace the table with a figure
• Every key result should appear in EITHER a figure or a table, not both (save space)
• Place the most important figure/table near the beginning of the results section

Data Visualization (Schwabish, JEP)

• Show the data, not the analyst's cleverness
• Reduce non-data ink (Tufte principle)
• Use direct labels instead of legends when possible
• Highlight the comparison that matters
• Use consistent color schemes across related figures

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EMPIRICAL WORK RULES

The previous section covered how to format tables and figures; this section covers what they should show and why -- the substance of an empirical paper is its identification and how its results are presented.

Identification (Cochrane)

The three most important things: Identification, Identification, Identification.

1. Describe what economic mechanism caused dispersion in your right-hand variables
2. Describe what constitutes the error term (what else causes variation in Y?)
3. Explain why the error term is uncorrelated with X in economic terms
4. Explain the economics of why your instruments are valid
5. Describe the source of variation driving your estimates for every number you present

For strategy-specific narrative structure (RCT, DiD/staggered, IV, RDD, Synthetic Control/DiD, Bunching, Shift-Share, Event Study, ML, Structural), see identification-strategies.md.

Results Presentation

• Start with the main result. No warmup exercises
• Follow with graphs and tables giving intuition
• Show how the main result is a robust feature of compelling stylized facts
• Follow with limited robustness checks (put most in web appendix)
• Give stylized facts in the data, not just estimates and p-values
• Explain economic significance, not just statistical significance -- with a large enough sample even a trivial effect becomes statistically significant, so a small p-value alone says little; the reader needs the magnitude relative to a benchmark to judge whether the effect matters
• Translate coefficients into meaningful units: dollars, percentage points, standard deviations, or equivalent policy benchmarks
• Compare your effect size to: (a) the mean of the dependent variable, (b) the effect of a well-known intervention, or (c) a policy-relevant threshold. Example: "The effect equals 40% of the black-white test score gap"
• For elasticities, state whether they are at the mean, at the median, or arc elasticities
• Back-of-envelope calculations are encouraged: "At the sample mean, this implies X additional dollars per household per year"
• Present results from most parsimonious to least parsimonious specification so the reader can see how the estimate moves as controls are added. Coefficient stability is suggestive -- not conclusive -- evidence against omitted-variable bias, and only when the added controls move the R-squared meaningfully (a coefficient can be stable yet biased if the controls explain little); report the R-squared changes, and ideally an Oster (2019) bound, rather than relying on stability alone

Presenting Null Results

• A null result IS a result. Frame it as informative, not as failure
• Distinguish between "no effect" (precisely estimated zero) and "imprecisely estimated" (wide confidence intervals that include both zero and meaningful effects) -- failing to reject zero is not the same as establishing zero; only a tight interval that excludes economically meaningful effects is informative about absence
• Report confidence intervals alongside or instead of p-values -- "we can rule out effects larger than X"
• Discuss statistical power: was the study powered to detect economically meaningful effects?
• If pre-registered, emphasize that the null was not the result of specification searching
• Relate to prior literature: does the null contradict or refine previous findings?

Common Empirical Mistakes

• R-squared interpretation depends on context: in cross-sectional micro regressions (wages, health), 0.1-0.3 is typical; an R-squared near 1 in a cross-section often signals a mechanical relationship -- you included "right shoes" to predict "left shoes" (Cochrane). In time-series or macro, high R-squared may be appropriate. Never judge a paper by R-squared; the coefficient on X and its standard error are what matter
• Do not include all determinants of Y as controls. A "bad control" is itself an outcome of the treatment, so conditioning on it does not cleanly remove a mechanism -- it compares non-comparable groups and induces selection bias. Education's effect works partly through industry, so controlling for industry does not isolate the "non-industry" return; it biases the estimate (Angrist and Pischke, Mostly Harmless Econometrics, Sec. 3.2.3)
• Do not confuse instruments with controls
• Do not claim causality without clearly explaining your identification strategy
• Do not ignore reverse causality
• Always address: (i) reverse causality, (ii) unobserved heterogeneity, (iii) measurement error

Standard Errors and Inference

• Cluster standard errors at the level of treatment assignment (not the most granular unit), and state the clustering level explicitly -- when treatment is assigned and shocks are correlated within a cluster, observations are not independent, so treating them as independent understates standard errors and overstates significance
• With few clusters (rule of thumb: fewer than ~40, worse when cluster sizes are unbalanced), cluster-robust standard errors over-reject -- the cluster-robust variance estimator is consistent only as the number of clusters grows, so with few clusters it is biased down and standard critical values reject true nulls too often; use the wild cluster bootstrap (Cameron, Gelbach, and Miller 2008) or randomization inference instead
• For randomized or design-based settings, randomization (permutation) inference is often more credible than relying on asymptotic standard errors

Heterogeneity Analysis

• Present heterogeneity results AFTER the main result, not before
• Pre-specify subgroups based on theory, not data mining
• Report the number of subgroups tested (multiple testing problem)
• Interpret magnitudes: "The effect is 3x larger for women" is more informative than "The interaction term is significant"
• Use visual presentation (forest plots or coefficient plots) when showing many subgroups

Mechanisms

• Mechanisms sections should test specific channels, not speculate
• Structure as: (1) theory predicts mechanism M, (2) if M operates, we should observe X, (3) we test for X
• Distinguish between mediation analysis and suggestive evidence
• Be honest about what your data can and cannot identify mechanistically
• Do NOT list every possible mechanism without testing any of them

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MODERN EMPIRICAL PRACTICES

The rules above are timeless; the practices below are the credibility-revolution conventions that referees and data editors increasingly expect. Treat them as defaults, not optional extras.

Pre-Registration and Pre-Analysis Plans

• If your study is pre-registered, state this in the introduction (it is a credibility asset)
• Clearly distinguish pre-specified analyses from exploratory analyses
• Report any deviations from the pre-analysis plan explicitly, with the reason for each
• Reference the pre-analysis plan (e.g., AEA RCT Registry number)

Multiple Testing

• When testing multiple outcomes or subgroups, acknowledge the multiple testing problem
• Pre-specify outcome families and consider summary indices to reduce the number of tests
• Report family-wise error rate corrections (Bonferroni, Holm) or false discovery rate (Benjamini-Hochberg); for pre-specified outcome families, report Anderson (2008) sharpened FDR q-values
• At minimum, flag which results survive multiple testing correction

Specification Robustness

• Do NOT present only the specification that "works"
• Consider a specification curve or multiverse analysis for key results
• Report the distribution of estimates across reasonable specifications

Transparency and Reproducibility

• State data availability clearly: public, restricted access, or proprietary
• Provide or reference replication code
• Describe any data cleaning decisions that materially affect results
• If using restricted data, describe the application process so others can replicate

Citation Integrity

• Verify every citation: confirm that the author names, year, journal, and key finding are accurate. AI tools frequently hallucinate or misattribute citations
• When citing a result from another paper, check that you are citing the correct specification (e.g., the preferred estimate, not a robustness check)
• Distinguish between working paper versions and published versions -- findings sometimes change between versions
• Do NOT cite papers you have not read. If you know a paper only through secondary citations, cite the secondary source: "as discussed in [secondary source]"
• For well-known results (e.g., Mincer returns, gravity equation), cite the original source, not a textbook or survey

Replication Packages (AEA Data Editor Standards)

• Every empirical paper submitted to AEA journals (and increasingly other journals) must include a replication package
• Include a README following the Social Science Data Editors template: Data Availability & Provenance Statements, Dataset List, Computational Requirements (software versions, hardware, expected runtime), Description of Programs, Instructions for Replicators
• Cite every dataset in the manuscript's References section with standard in-text citations -- including datasets you created
• Directory structure: data/raw/, data/analysis/, code/, results/. Never commingle code and data files
• Code must reproduce all results without manual intervention. The only exception: a single config file where replicators set directory paths
• For restricted-access data: provide a Data Availability Statement explaining application procedures, expected wait times, and any monetary costs
• Include a LICENSE.txt (AEA recommends CC-BY 4.0 for data and documents, and the modified BSD license for code)
• Map every table and figure to a specific program file: "Table 3 is produced by code/table3_main_results.do"
• These standards apply to AEA, Econometrica (ES Data Editor), Economic Journal, and increasingly to field journals

AI Use Disclosure

• AEA policy: AI may not be listed as an author. If AI was used in drafting or editing the manuscript, disclose this during submission
• Econometric Society: requires a responsibility statement that all co-authors accept responsibility for all content
• What to disclose: drafting assistance, code generation, literature search assistance, data analysis suggestions
• What typically does not require disclosure: spell-check, grammar tools, LaTeX formatting
• Regardless of journal policy: you are responsible for verifying ALL AI-generated content, including citations, numerical claims, and statistical interpretations
• Practical rule: if AI drafted a paragraph, read it as if a careless RA wrote it -- verify every fact, every citation, every number

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TITLE WRITING

Formulas

• Best form: "The Impact of [D] on [Y]: Evidence from [Context]"
• Alternative: "[D] and [Y]" (shorter, acceptable)
• For theory papers: name the key mechanism or insight, not the technique
• For structural papers: "[Counterfactual Question]: Evidence from [Context]"
• Keep titles short -- some studies find shorter titles are associated with more citations (Letchford, Moat, and Preis 2015), though the evidence is mixed
• Do NOT emphasize methodology in title unless you invented the method

Title Evaluation Criteria

When writing or reviewing a title, score on these dimensions:

1. Clarity -- Can a non-specialist understand the topic in one reading?
2. Specificity -- Are the treatment/cause and outcome/effect both named?
3. Length -- Under 12 words is ideal; under 15 is acceptable
4. Memorability -- Would someone remember this title at a conference?
5. No methodology -- Does it emphasize the finding, not the method?

Good vs. Bad Title Examples

• Good: "The Oregon Health Insurance Experiment: Evidence from the First Year" (clear, specific, memorable)
• Good: "The China Syndrome: Local Labor Market Effects of Import Competition" (clever + clear)
• Good: "Pollution and Mortality: Evidence from the 1952 London Fog" (treatment + outcome + context)
• Bad: "A Difference-in-Differences Analysis of Education Policy" (methodology, not finding)
• Bad: "On the Relationship Between Various Factors and Economic Outcomes" (says nothing)
• Bad: "Essays on Labor Economics" (acceptable for a dissertation, never for a paper)

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FIELD-SPECIFIC CONVENTIONS

Not all economics subfields follow identical conventions. The rules and templates elsewhere in this skill assume applied-micro defaults; where a convention below conflicts with an earlier default (page length, abstract length, primary exhibit), the field convention wins. Adapt these rules by field:

Applied Micro (Labor, Public, Health, Education, Development)

• This is the default style the skill assumes. Most rules above apply directly
• For development RCTs: pre-registration is nearly mandatory; include a CONSORT-style flow diagram; report cost-effectiveness alongside treatment effects
• Balance tables are central for experimental work -- report them prominently, not in an appendix

Macroeconomics

• Papers are longer (40-60 pages is normal); the "under 40 pages" advice does not apply
• Calibration tables are standard: columns for parameter name, value, source/target moment
• Impulse response functions (IRFs) are the primary results visualization, not regression tables
• Model validation section ("Model Fit") comparing model moments to data moments is expected
• DSGE papers: describe the steady state, log-linearization or solution method, and shock specification
• Results are often framed as "the model generates X" rather than "I find X"

Trade

• Gravity model estimation has specific conventions: PPML estimation (Santos Silva and Tenreyro 2006), multilateral resistance controls, fixed effects structure
• General equilibrium counterfactuals are expected in structural trade papers
• Use 3-year or 5-year panel intervals (not annual) with specific justification

Finance

• Abstract limit is often 100 words at some journals (not 150)
• Fama-MacBeth regressions and portfolio-sort presentation are standard conventions
• Variable winsorization at 1%/99% is expected and must be reported
• Chicago Manual of Style citation format at some journals (differs from AEA)

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PAPER STRUCTURE OVERVIEW

Standard Applied Economics Paper

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, concrete findings)
3. Introduction (3-5 pages, includes literature review)
4. Theoretical Framework (optional; only if it adds to understanding the empirics)
5. Data and Descriptive Statistics (answer all questions about the data)
6. Empirical Framework (estimation strategy + identification strategy)
7. Results and Discussion (main results, robustness, mechanisms, limitations)
8. Conclusion (summary, policy implications, future research)
9. References
10. Appendix / Online Supplement (robustness checks, proofs, extra tables)

Theory Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state the main result/insight)
3. Introduction (motivate the puzzle, state the main insight, describe the mechanism, relate to literature)
4. Model Setup (primitives, assumptions, timing -- keep it as simple as possible)
5. Analysis / Main Results (propositions with intuition before proofs)
6. Extensions (relax key assumptions, add heterogeneity)
7. Discussion / Empirical Implications (testable predictions, relation to data)
8. Conclusion
9. References
10. Appendix (proofs, technical details)

Mixed Theory-Empirical Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state both the theoretical insight and empirical finding)
3. Introduction (motivate the puzzle, state the theoretical contribution AND the empirical result)
4. Model (develop the theory, derive testable predictions)
5. Data and Institutional Background
6. Empirical Strategy (how you test the model's predictions)
7. Results (map results explicitly back to the model's predictions)
8. Conclusion
9. References
10. Appendix (proofs, robustness checks, additional tables)

Structural Paper Structure

1. Title (short, informative)
2. Abstract (100-150 words, state the key counterfactual finding)
3. Introduction (motivate the question, describe the approach, state key counterfactual results)
4. Model (develop the structural model with clear economic assumptions)
5. Data and Institutional Background
6. Estimation (identification, estimation method, computational details)
7. Model Fit and Validation (in-sample fit, out-of-sample validation)
8. Counterfactual Analysis (the payoff -- policy simulations, welfare calculations)
9. Conclusion
10. Appendix (estimation details, additional counterfactuals)

Appendix and Online Supplement Organization

• The main paper should stand alone -- a reader should not need the appendix to understand your argument
• Appendix content: robustness checks, additional specifications, variable definitions, data cleaning details, proofs, and extended tables
• Number appendix tables and figures separately (Table A1, Figure A1) to avoid confusion
• Reference every appendix item from the main text ("see Table A3 in the online appendix")
• Place the most important robustness checks in the main paper, not the appendix
• Organize the appendix in the same order as the main paper
• Online supplements can be longer than the main paper, but each item should still be referenced in the main text

Job Market Paper (JMP) Considerations

• The JMP is your calling card. It must demonstrate that you can identify an important question, execute credibly, and write clearly -- all by yourself (even if coauthored, your contribution must be unmistakable)
• Title: should be memorable and signal your field. Avoid generic titles -- hiring committees scan hundreds of JMPs
• Abstract: lead with the finding, not the method. Make it intelligible to economists outside your subfield
• Introduction: must be exceptionally polished. Many committee members read only the introduction. Put your most impressive result up front
• Length: aim for the shorter end (30-35 pages). Committees are reading dozens of papers; shorter papers get read more carefully
• Signal your awareness of the broader literature beyond your subfield -- hiring departments want colleagues, not narrow specialists
• If your paper uses a novel method, emphasize the economic insight it delivers, not the method itself. Committees hire economists, not econometricians (unless you are applying for a methods position)
• Presentation materials (job talk slides) should follow the same "get to the result fast" principle -- the main result should appear within the first 10 minutes

Dissertation Structure (Three-Essays Format)

• Standard economics PhD dissertation: introduction chapter, three standalone papers, conclusion chapter (~150 pages total)
• Introduction chapter (10-15 pages): establishes thematic linkage between the three papers, provides essential background. NOT a literature review -- each paper has its own
• Each essay must be free-standing: readable independently, with its own abstract, introduction, and conclusion. They should share a common theme but not depend on each other
• Conclusion chapter (5-10 pages): ties papers together, discusses the unified contribution, identifies cross-cutting future directions
• At least one essay should be sole-authored. The JMP should ideally be sole-authored
• Order the essays by quality: strongest paper first (committees often read only the first essay in detail)
• Senior/undergraduate theses differ: may include a preface, require a table of contents, and typically have a single extended paper rather than three essays

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USE CASE INSTRUCTIONS

When asked to DRAFT a section or full paper:

1. Determine the paper type (applied empirical, theory, mixed, structural, descriptive) and adapt accordingly
2. Follow the formulas above for the relevant section
3. Use concrete placeholder language where you need the author's specific results
4. Mark areas needing the author's input with [AUTHOR: description of what's needed]
5. Apply all style rules from the start
6. Write in the triangular/newspaper style -- most important first

When asked to REWRITE existing text:

1. Identify specific violations of the rules above
2. Fix passive voice, vague language, throat-clearing, buried leads
3. Tighten prose -- cut unnecessary words and sentences
4. Ensure concrete results are stated with magnitudes
5. Preserve the author's meaning and contribution
6. Briefly note what you changed and why

When asked to write an INTRODUCTION:

Apply the Introduction Formula above (Hook → Question → Results → Literature Review & Value Added → Roadmap): results at 25-30% of the intro, the literature review as the last substantive section before the roadmap, and a 3-5 page cap. See WRITING THE INTRODUCTION.

When asked to write a LITERATURE REVIEW:

1. Place it as the last part of the introduction (before roadmap), NOT as a separate section
2. Tell a STORY, not an annotated bibliography
3. Focus on 5-10 closest papers
4. Build toward a "however" or "although" that establishes your paper's niche
5. Be generous with credit, never insulting

When asked to write an ABSTRACT:

Apply the 4-part formula above (What / How / Findings / Implications): 100-150 words, concrete findings with magnitudes, no citations, no jargon, no passive voice. See WRITING THE ABSTRACT.

When asked to write a CONCLUSION:

Apply the 3-part formula above (Summary / Implications / Future Research): one page, phrase findings differently from the abstract and introduction, and do not speculate beyond the data or model. Project confidence -- avoid a generic caveats dump, though a brief, specific limitations note is fine (especially for experimental/policy work). See WRITING THE CONCLUSION.

When asked to write RESULTS:

1. Main result first -- no warmup exercises
2. Most parsimonious to least parsimonious specifications
3. Explain economic magnitude, not just statistical significance
4. Include robustness checks, mechanisms, and limitations subsections
5. Use visuals before tables for preliminary results
6. For null results: frame as informative, report confidence intervals, discuss power

When asked to write a THEORY or MODEL section:

1. The introduction must state the main insight/mechanism in plain English within the first two paragraphs
2. Motivate with a puzzle, stylized fact, or policy question -- not with "the literature lacks a model of..."
3. Model section: state assumptions clearly, explain their economic content, and note which are essential vs. simplifying
4. Present propositions with economic intuition BEFORE the formal proof. Readers should understand the result before seeing the math
5. Use the simplest model that generates the key insight, and start from a concrete example rather than the general case (Varian)
6. Discuss comparative statics verbally: "When X increases, Y falls because..."
7. Generate testable predictions -- even if you do not test them, state what data would be needed
8. Proofs belong in the appendix unless they illuminate the economic mechanism
9. For mixed theory-empirical papers: map each regression to a specific proposition

When asked to write a DATA SECTION:

Apply the Data Section guidance above: name the dataset, time period, and unit of observation in the first sentence; describe sample construction and variable definitions; include a summary statistics table; address limitations and sample selection in the text (not footnotes); give enough institutional background for the identification strategy. See WRITING THE DATA SECTION.

When asked about PRESENTATIONS: see specialized-tasks.md

When asked to write a SURVEY or REVIEW PAPER (JEL, JEP, Handbook chapter): see specialized-tasks.md

When asked to convert a WORKING PAPER to a JOURNAL VERSION: see specialized-tasks.md

When asked to write a GRANT PROPOSAL (NSF, NBER, ERC, institutional): see specialized-tasks.md

When asked to write for a NON-ACADEMIC AUDIENCE (policy brief, op-ed, blog post): see specialized-tasks.md

When asked to REVIEW or AUDIT a paper:

1. Use the review checklist framework (see review-checklist.md)
2. Provide three perspectives: Methodologist (identification, robustness), Field Expert (contribution, economic significance), Writing Critic (style, clarity)
3. Score the paper on each component (title, abstract, introduction, methodology, results, writing, tables/figures, conclusion) out of 100
4. Flag any AI-generated writing patterns (see Anti-AI section above)
5. Prioritize feedback: list the 3 most impactful changes first, then minor issues
6. For each issue, state what is wrong, why it matters, and how to fix it with a concrete example

When asked to write a REFEREE RESPONSE: see specialized-tasks.md

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REVISION CHECKLIST

Before submitting, verify:

• Central contribution is stated concretely in paragraphs 1-3 of introduction
• Main results appear in the introduction with magnitudes
• No needless passive voice in prose (search for "to be" + past participle -- "was estimated", "is shown", "are reported" -- and "by"-agent phrases, NOT every "is"/"are", which also mark present tense; passive acceptable in table captions and methods)
• No throat-clearing before the main point
• Literature review tells a story, not a list
• Every table has a self-contained caption with clustering/SE specification
• Every number in tables is discussed in text
• Standard errors reported for every important number
• Identification strategy is clearly explained in economic terms
• Conclusion is under one page and projects confidence -- no generic caveats dump (a brief, specific limitations note is fine, especially for experimental/policy work)
• Abstract is under 150 words and concrete
• Paper is under 40 pages (check target journal guidelines)
• All Greek letters and notation are defined with names
• No "illustrative" empirical work
• No abbreviations of author names
• Pre-trends shown visually for DiD designs; RD plot shown for RDD designs
• Heterogeneity results are pre-specified and multiple-testing-aware
• Mechanisms section tests channels rather than speculates
• Data availability and replication information are clearly stated
• Appendix items are all referenced from the main text
• Title is under 15 words and contains the treatment and outcome (or key mechanism for theory)
• For theory papers: main propositions have clear economic intuition before formal proofs
• Descriptive statistics table included with variable definitions in notes
• All equations introduced verbally before display; all variables defined after display

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For identification-strategy-specific writing guidance (RCT, DiD, IV, RDD, Synthetic Control, Bunching, Shift-Share, ML), see identification-strategies.md.

For LaTeX formatting guidance (tables, figures, bibliography, journal submission), see latex-tips.md.

For structured paper review with simulated reviewers and scoring, see review-checklist.md.

For specialized tasks (presentations, survey/review papers, working-paper-to-journal conversion, grant proposals, policy briefs/op-eds, referee responses), see specialized-tasks.md.

This skill synthesizes advice from 50+ sources. Top sources: Cochrane (Chicago/Hoover), McCloskey (Chicago/UIC), Shapiro (Harvard), Head (UBC), Bellemare (Minnesota), Goldin & Katz (Harvard), Glaeser (Harvard), Kremer (Harvard/Chicago), Nikolov (Binghamton/Harvard), Schwabish (JEP), Evans (CGDev), Dudenhefer (Duke). Full source list: github.com/hanlulong/econ-writing-skill